For your final draft, be sure to avoid sloppiness, poor English, spelling errors, whining, manufacturing a personality, avoiding the questions that are asked on the application, high school experiences, personal biases about religion, ethnicity, politics, sexist language, revealing of character weaknesses, and arrogance.
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Keep business letters which you receive in English (for example from a school or company) and try to learn from heir style.
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You should end the letter with "Yours faithfully" ("Faithfully yours" is only used in American English).
If you know the person's name (for example, Mr Green), you should normally start a business letter with "Dear Mr Green".