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…provide facts, evidence, and statistics to support your position
It is to be considered that university graduate is the key to find a promising job while some think that experience and interpersonal skills are essential. In my opinion, university education is necessary for academics job and soft skills for management jobs.
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Recent years have seen rapid urbanization around the globe which in turn has resulted in large companies building sky scrapers rather than individual houses. Housing statistics issued by European Commission in 2016 revealed that 70% people dwell in apartments in Spain rather than in houses.
One of the key advantages of an apartment is security. Having been raised in an apartment myself, I can vouch for the fact that my father used to travel in comfort knowing that our neighbours were there to help us in case of an unfortunate event. Moreover, uninterrupted power and water supply has pushed more people to opt for apartments as the hectic schedule of most professionals leave them little time to worry about scarcity of resources which are of utmost importance.
In addition to the above, club facilities for example access to gym, swimming pool etc. helps individuals to maintain a healthy life style without travelling long distances. Availability of convenience stores within the apartment complex is also a factor which contributes to people preferring apartments over houses. However, every benefit comes with strings attached and apartments are no exception. Sound seepage between the walls of the adjoining apartments has been a deciding factor for certain individuals who prefer to live in houses. Also, ability to design the house as per one’s taste and be able to modify the exteriors in the future is an aspect missing in apartments. Growing and larger families prefer house as this give them space by building a conservatory or loft in future.
In conclusion, the type of space one selects for living is down to one’s interests in life, profession and the size of the family. However, personally I find apartment living a much wiser and economical option than living in a house.
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On the other hand, other people also think that getting experiences and developing soft skills is more essential to be part of any organizations. Experienced and developed soft skills are the supporting chain for the standardize jobs. Every Individuals having experiences brings the innovative change in their working performances. Development of organizations fully depends upon the role of employee who are experienced practically. Experienced candidates will be lifted with good job opportunity in the reputed organizations as well as will be paid up highly.
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To me, it was an outstanding effort but I think the thesis statement in the introduction is missing. And you should sort out the advantages n disadvantages in two separate paragraphs.