if i divided this essay into
Intro:includes paraphrasing ,and thesis that includes my opinion
BP1: Admittedly,there r some benefits 4 money,,,,
Conclusion:conclude my opinion
is it ok?
You need to understand that it is teachers who divide the essays into different types. It is a way of teaching. Some direct questions require opinions, some do not. All you need to do is answer the direct question(s) given. For example: Why is happiness different for different people? What factors contribute toward happiness? This is a direct question essay with two questions to answer. An opinion essay is an essay that only asks “Do you agree or disagree” / “To what extent do you agree or disagree”. But always remember, your aim is just to follow instructions. Each teacher teaches the essays differently and divides the essay types differently.
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Thanks for your kind efforts. First of all, I have to say this essay is awesome due to the rich ideas you presented.
I have a question. In Thesis statement we always mention three points which are connecting to question, using for example I my opinion and more importantly our opinion. why did not say your opinion in the thesis statement? you just implied that there are other aspects.
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I generally comment on IELTS exam technique rather than English. Try to avoid writing about yourself or friends in an IELTS essay. Don’t use “you” or “your”. Also try to balance your paragraphs and make sure that each main point is equally developed. Vocabulary is not a problem, you need to learn more about essay writing techniques. Please see the rules for posting writing:
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We learn to experience emotions like love, care and share just by living in this society Our family and friends indeed are the most important.